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One of the biggest problems the world encounter today is a virus called corona19. But I believe this issue can be resolved by governmental intervention and with the help of medical personnel such as doctors, nurses, volunteer and so on.
They are working very hard. To be specific, they should wear a special clothes which are difficult to put on and put out. Not only that I read a letter from an organization. Those who couldn\\\'t take a shower and take a break time are difficulty in lack of necessary of life supplies such as water, toothpastes, shampoo and more.
Under these circumstances, I think medical people are the most brave and diligence.
I appreciate everyone who are trying to overcome the issue.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Eve. ^^
They are working very hard.
I appreciate everyone who are trying to overcome the issue.
Your composition was made beautifully!
~t. Ally
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One of the biggest problems the world encounter today is a virus called corona19.
>> CORRECT!
But I believe this issue can be resolved by governmental intervention and with the help of medical personnel such as doctors, nurses, volunteer and so on.
>> CORRECT!
They are working very hard.
>> CORRECT!
To be specific, they should wear a special clothes which are difficult to put on and put out.
>> To be specific, they should wear special clothes which are difficult to put on and remove.
Not only that I read a letter from an organization.
>> Not only that, but I read a letter from an organization.
Those who couldn\'t take a shower and take a break time are difficulty in lack of necessary of life supplies such as water, toothpastes, shampoo and more.
>> CORRECT!
Under these circumstances, I think medical people are the most brave and diligence.
>> Under these circumstances, I think medical people are the most brave and diligent.
I appreciate everyone who are trying to overcome the issue.
>> I appreciate everyone who is trying to overcome the issue.
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