Homework
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HOMEWORK:
Writing Task: Do you think more people will work from home in the near future? Why? Why not?
Yes, I think more people will work from home in the near future. As technologe develops, our life will be comfortable and the process of tasks will be faster and easier. so we will be working at home more time in the future due to improvement of technologe including comunication development and improvement of computer functions.
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Yes, I think more people will work from home in the near future.
>>CORRECT!As technologe develops, our life will be comfortable and the process of tasks will be faster and easier.
>>As technology develops, our life will be comfortable and the process of tasks will be faster and easier.
OR: As technology advances, our lives will be relaxed and the process of work will be faster and easier.
so we will be working at home more time in the future due to improvement of technologe including comunication development and improvement of computer functions.
>>So in the future, we will spend more time at home in accordance with technological improvements such as communication development and computer functions.
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