homework
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I visited canada in October last year for a week. After hard working I wanted to give me a present. so I bought the ticket to vancouver as a gift for me. I booked my flight ticket and the hotels. But I was realized that it couldn’t be a gift for me because my english wasn’t good enough. Before the beginning of the trip I already knew about my english level but I thought it would be not so bad. But it was terrible. I was too proud by then.
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Ola Mr. [이름]-Gi!
Another homework done today, great!
Thanks for sharing, I guess you were nervous when you arrived in Canada-hahaha.
But it is a good thing that you have realized to study the English language. With this, you were able to communicate with different people.
You made a good decision to visit Canada!
I visited canada in October last year for a week.
>>I visited Canada last October for a week.
After hard working I wanted to give me a present.
>>After working hard, I wanted to give myself a present.
so I bought the ticket to vancouver as a gift for me.
>>So I bought a ticket to Vancouver as a gift.
I booked my flight ticket and the hotels.
>>I booked a plane ticket and a hotel.
But I was realized that it couldn’t be a gift for me because my english wasn’t good enough.
>>But I realized it couldn\'t be a gift, because my English wasn\'t good enough.
Before the beginning of the trip I already knew about my english level but I thought it would be not so bad.
>>Before the trip began I already knew my English level, but I thought it would not be so bad.
But it was terrible.
>>CORRECT!
I was too proud by then.
>>CORRECT!
OR: By that time I was so proud
>>I visited Canada last October for a week.
After hard working I wanted to give me a present.
>>After working hard, I wanted to give myself a present.
so I bought the ticket to vancouver as a gift for me.
>>So I bought a ticket to Vancouver as a gift.
I booked my flight ticket and the hotels.
>>I booked a plane ticket and a hotel.
But I was realized that it couldn’t be a gift for me because my english wasn’t good enough.
>>But I realized it couldn\'t be a gift, because my English wasn\'t good enough.
Before the beginning of the trip I already knew about my english level but I thought it would be not so bad.
>>Before the trip began I already knew my English level, but I thought it would not be so bad.
But it was terrible.
>>CORRECT!
I was too proud by then.
>>CORRECT!
OR: By that time I was so proud
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