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2020-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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HOMEWORK: Writing Task: Do you drink coffee every day? If so, does it help you focus? If not, why not? Yes, I drink coffee every morning. I don\'t think it help me to focus. It\'s just my habit. I\'d like to start a day with a cup of fresh coffee. However, I don\'t drink cofee at late evening becuase I have a trouble to sleep well.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms . [이름]!

Thanks for another homework.

I always drink coffee, even late in the evening - hahaha.

I think coffee is really addictive. Thanks again^^

Yes, I drink coffee every morning.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t think it help me to focus.
>>I don\'t think it helps me to focus.
It\'s just my habit.
>>CORRECT!
I\'d like to start a day with a cup of fresh coffee.
>>CORRECT!
However, I don\'t drink cofee at late evening becuase I have a trouble to sleep well.
>>However, I don\'t drink coffee in the evening because I have trouble sleeping.

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