Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Which do you prefer, baby boys or baby girls?
I have both a girl and boy baby.
The both have different merits.
I\'m woman, So a girl is like a friend and kind, and understands emotions well.
The boy is full of energy.
But he is still a baby, so he is just lovely.
All baby are lovely.
Therefore, it is difficult to prefer boys and girls.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Making choices between the options is not easy. It is an unfair questions, I guess. We don\'t have to choose between the two. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>CORRECT!
The both have different merits.
The both have different merits.
>>Both have different merits.
I\'m woman, So a girl is like a friend and kind, and understands emotions well.
I\'m woman, So a girl is like a friend and kind, and understands emotions well.
>>I\'m a woman, so having a daughter is like having a friend who is kind and who understands my emotions well.
The boy is full of energy.
The boy is full of energy.
>>CORRECT!
But he is still a baby, so he is just lovely.
But he is still a baby, so he is just lovely.
>>CORRECT!
All baby are lovely.
All baby are lovely.
>>All babies are lovely.
Therefore, it is difficult to prefer boys and girls.
Therefore, it is difficult to prefer boys and girls.
>>Therefore, it is difficult to have a preference between boys and girls.
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