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My best friend lives in Dobong-gu, Seoul. He is married to a very beautiful and nice woman and has 2 children. He looks very happy but he never talked about his family. So I asked ihm why he is not talking about his family. His answer was surprising me. The reason why he wasn’t talking about his family was because I’m single. He said he thought the story about his family won’t be my interest. but he was wrong. Why I’m not interested in the family of my best friend? but I will have to admit he is so thoughtful.
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Hi there Mr. [이름]-Gi^^
Lucky you are to have such best friend. Not everyone are lucky to have one.
Thanks for sharing^^
My best friend lives in Dobong-gu, Seoul.
>>CORRECT!
He is married to a very beautiful and nice woman and has 2 children.
>>CORRECT!
He looks very happy but he never talked about his family.
>>He looks very happy, but he never talked about his family.
So I asked ihm why he is not talking about his family.
>>So I asked him why he doesn\'t talk about his family.
His answer was surprising me.
>>CORRECT!
The reason why he wasn’t talking about his family was because I’m single.
>>CORRECT!
He said he thought the story about his family won’t be my interest. but he was wrong.
>>He thought that talking about his family wouldn\'t be my interest, but he\'s wrong.
Why I’m not interested in the family of my best friend?
>>Why wouldn\'t I be interested in my best friend\'s family?
but I will have to admit he is so thoughtful.
>>But I will have to admit he is so thoughtful.
OR: But I\'ll have to admit he\'s very thoughtful.
>>CORRECT!
He is married to a very beautiful and nice woman and has 2 children.
>>CORRECT!
He looks very happy but he never talked about his family.
>>He looks very happy, but he never talked about his family.
So I asked ihm why he is not talking about his family.
>>So I asked him why he doesn\'t talk about his family.
His answer was surprising me.
>>CORRECT!
The reason why he wasn’t talking about his family was because I’m single.
>>CORRECT!
He said he thought the story about his family won’t be my interest. but he was wrong.
>>He thought that talking about his family wouldn\'t be my interest, but he\'s wrong.
Why I’m not interested in the family of my best friend?
>>Why wouldn\'t I be interested in my best friend\'s family?
but I will have to admit he is so thoughtful.
>>But I will have to admit he is so thoughtful.
OR: But I\'ll have to admit he\'s very thoughtful.
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