homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay: When you choose a hotel for your travel which one of the following factors would be the most important thing and why? Give reasons for your opinion.
- distance from an airport
- service of staff members
- quality of facilities
I think that the quality of facilities is the most important thing when I choose a hotel for my travel.
Most of all, I can take a rest cozy and conveniently during travel.
Abut 4 months ago, I was travelling to European countries. When I stayed in the hotel having great conditions, I could do a lot of activities next day because I had good sleep.
However, I sometimes accommodated at the hotel having poor conditions like hostels because of my budget.
Some people had talking in their sleep and some people came into our room too late. So I couldn\'t get a rest well.
It makes me getting tired next day.
Therefore, I think the most important thing for choosing a hotel is the quality of facilities.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bo [이름],
That was quick! You are indeed a diligent person; you do your work seriously and enthusiastically. Thanks for the prompt reply:)
-Rachel
I think that the quality of facilities is the most important thing when I choose a hotel for my travel.
>> correct
Most of all, I can take a rest cozy and conveniently during travel.
Most of all, I can take a rest cozy and conveniently during travel.
>> correct (acceptable in spoken English)
>> Above all else, I can rest cozily and conveniently while traveling.
Abut 4 months ago, I was travelling to European countries. When I stayed in the hotel having great conditions, I could do a lot of activities next day because I had good sleep.
Abut 4 months ago, I was travelling to European countries. When I stayed in the hotel having great conditions, I could do a lot of activities next day because I had good sleep.
>> correct (we just add \"the\" before next day- the next day)
However, I sometimes accommodated at the hotel having poor conditions like hostels because of my budget.
However, I sometimes accommodated at the hotel having poor conditions like hostels because of my budget.
>> However, I sometimes get accommodated at hotels with poor condition like hostels because of my budget.
>> However, I find accommodation at hotels with poor condition like hostels because of my limited budget.
Some people had talking in their sleep and some people came into our room too late. So I couldn\'t get a rest well.
>> Some people talk in their sleep and some people come into our room late, so I cannot get a rest well/ I cannot get enough rest.
It makes me getting tired next day.
It makes me getting tired next day.
>> It makes me tired the next day.
Therefore, I think the most important thing for choosing a hotel is the quality of facilities.
Therefore, I think the most important thing for choosing a hotel is the quality of facilities.
>> correct
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