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Q: Do you feel safe when you use public transportation?
I think that the answer to this question seems to be related the COVID 19.
The public transportation is not safe because many people use it together.
And we don’t know who is infected so we have to be careful ourselves.
When we use the public transportation if possible we should not speak and we should wear the mask.
It is better not to use public transportation in this situation, but if we are inevitable, we have to be careful ourselves.
If someone feel a problem with his body, he shouldn’t use public transportation and he should go to the hospital designated by government with own vehicle.
Now, it is a situation in which we are keely asked to consider each other.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]! Our current situation trully require everyone\'s cooperation and concern for each other. Let us try to contribute to make everyone feel safe. Have a good day!
I think that the answer to this question seems to be related the COVID 19.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I think, I like to answer this question in relation to COVID 19.
The public transportation is not safe because many people use it together.
The public transportation is not safe because many people use it together.
>>CORRECT!
And we don’t know who is infected so we have to be careful ourselves.
And we don’t know who is infected so we have to be careful ourselves.
>>CORRECT!
When we use the public transportation if possible we should not speak and we should wear the mask.
When we use the public transportation if possible we should not speak and we should wear the mask.
>>CORRECT!
It is better not to use public transportation in this situation, but if we are inevitable, we have to be careful ourselves.
It is better not to use public transportation in this situation, but if we are inevitable, we have to be careful ourselves.
>>It is better not to use public transportation in this situation, but if it is inevitable, we have to be careful of ourselves.
If someone feel a problem with his body, he shouldn’t use public transportation and he should go to the hospital designated by government with own vehicle.
If someone feel a problem with his body, he shouldn’t use public transportation and he should go to the hospital designated by government with own vehicle.
>>If someone feels any problem with his body, he shouldn’t use public transportation and he should go to the hospital designated by government with his own vehicle.
Now, it is a situation in which we are keely asked to consider each other.
Now, it is a situation in which we are keely asked to consider each other.
>>Now is a situation in which we have consider each other.
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