Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s about knowing self, and trying hard. The school is only teaching \"how to get high score\" and \"how to go good college\" but They may learn something different from their talents at school. and sometime they get fail in school but grow into a man and they know what i have talent and they have to strive for they dreams and they can success.
강사 첨삭
Hi Dasha!
Let\'s discuss your exact meaning in class.
There are a few sentences that I\'m not quite sure of the meaning.
We will improve your sentences in class.
Good job and keep practicing.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It\'s about knowing self, and trying hard.
>> It\'s about knowing yourself and trying hard.
The school is only teaching \"how to get high score\" and \"how to go good college\"
>> Schools are only teaching students how to get a high score or how to get into a good college.
but They may learn something different from their talents at school.
>> However, they may learn something aside from their talents in school.
and sometime they get fail in school but grow into a man and they know what i have talent
>> They sometimes fail in school but they grow up into a person who is aware of his/her talents.
and they have to strive for they dreams and they can success.
>> They have to strive for their dreams and they can be successful.
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