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My family has affected me in many ways. From the langauge I use to my political opinion. I am most influenced by my dad, so when I look back to what I said, I sometimes get shocked for realising that i said the same thing as my dad has once told me. I believe that affecting each other is irresistable when people exchange their thoughts, and it is well shown when we get into political or religious debate. I don\'t have a religion because my family doesn\'t believe in them. I am considered \'left\' when debating political agenda mostly because my dad has a liberal bent. I don\'t know how I would have been if I didn\'t meet my family, but it is undeniable that my family has affected me.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
My family has affected me in many ways.
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From the language I use to my political opinion.
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I am most influenced by my dad, so when I look back to what I said, I sometimes get shocked for realizing that I said the same thing as my dad has once told me.
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I believe that affecting each other is irresistible when people exchange their thoughts, and it is well shown when we get into political or religious debate.
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I don\'t have a religion because my family doesn\'t believe in it.
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I am considered \'left\' when debating political agenda mostly because my dad has a liberal bent.
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I don\'t know how I would have been if I didn\'t meet my family, but it is undeniable that my family has affected me.
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