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1.
Hunters think animals have valuable things. And they made ornaments and drugs from animals.So they sell very expensive. Therefore, hunters don\'t give up hunting animals even by sacrificing their life. They fight with animal protection group everyday. Lastly, we have to protect the value of animals.
2.
When I was [이름] in the zoo, I didn\'t feel pitiful for animals. I thought animals are living comfortably and they were happy. But I went the zoo recently, I felt pitiful for animals when I saw their face. They can\'t run freely in a small cage and they looked like birds that had lost their wings. I think animals should live in nature and we have to help them to live comfortable for extinct animals.
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~Lucy
Hunters think animals have valuable things.
>>CORRECT!
And they made ornaments and drugs from animals.
>>CORRECT!
So they sell very expensive.
>>So they sell it with a very expensive price.
Therefore, hunters don\'t give up hunting animals even by sacrificing their life.
>>Therefore, hunters don\'t give up hunting animals even by sacrificing their lives.
They fight with animal protection group everyday.
>>They fight with animal protection group every day.
Lastly, we have to protect the value of animals.
>>CORRECT!
When I was [이름] in the zoo, I didn\'t feel pitiful for animals.
>>When I was [이름] in the zoo, I didn\'t feel pity for the animals.
I thought animals are living comfortably and they were happy.
>>CORRECT!
But I went the zoo recently, I felt pitiful for animals when I saw their face.
>> But I went to the zoo recently, I felt pitiful for the animals when I saw their faces.
They can\'t run freely in a small cage and they looked like birds that had lost their wings.
>>CORRECT!
I think animals should live in nature and we have to help them to live comfortable for extinct animals.
>>CORRECT!
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