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There are connections between a person\'s style of life and duration of life, A persons style of life, such as habits, preference, s[이름]ping time decides how healthy the person is. When someone has excercised regularly throughout their life, the person has larger chance of living a long life than a person who lives lazy in their home. It is obvious that one\'t behavior throughout life is related to one\'t life expectancy. Therefore a person\'t style of life interacts closely to the person\'s duration of life.
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There are connections between a person\'s style of life and duration of life.
>>> CORRECT
A persons style of life, such as habits, preferences, s[이름]ping time decides how healthy the person is.
>>> CORRECT
When someone has excercised regularly throughout their life, the person has larger chance of living a long life than a person who lives lazy in their home.
>>> When someone exercises regularly throughout their life, the person has larger chance of living a long life than a person who lives lazy in their home.
It is obvious that one\'t behavior throughout life is related to one\'t life expectancy.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore a person\'t style of life interacts closely to the person\'s duration of life.
>>> Therefore a person\'s lifestyle interacts closely to the person\'s duration of life.
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