Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) What sport do you think is the most dangerous?
I think it is sea swimming is the most dangerous.
Because, there are many things that have not been confirmed.
And the sea is deep and wide.
The reason why sea swimming is dangerous is because I am not well swimming.
And I almost drowned the sea.
강사 첨삭
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>>I think swimming in the sea is the most dangerous.
Because, there are many things that have not been confirmed.
>>It\'s because, there are many things that have not been confirmed about it.
And the sea is deep and wide.
And the sea is deep and wide.
>>CORRECT!
The reason why sea swimming is dangerous is because I am not well swimming.
The reason why sea swimming is dangerous is because I am not well swimming.
>>The reason why I think it is dangerous is because I am not good at swimming.
And I almost drowned the sea.
And I almost drowned the sea.
>>I also was almost drowned in the sea.
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