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2020-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I would not visit china and mexico. Because i can\'t eat china food, and mexico is really dangerous country. In there many women are die.

Hi Dasha!

I wish you included more details.

I love reading your stories.

I agree with you.

However, I didn\'t know you don\'t eat Chinese food.

Let\'s talk more about that in class.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I would not visit china and mexico.

>> I would not visit China and Mexico.

Because i can\'t eat china food, and mexico is really dangerous country.

>> It\'s because I can\'t eat Chinese food and Mexico is a really dangerous country.

In there many women are die.

>> Many women die there.

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