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1.
I think Korea doesn\'t have almost child labor.
To be honest, Korea is rich compared to other counties.
Therefore almost children can live safely and receive an education well.
But there might be child labor who a handful of children with disabled parents and poor home.
Ultimately, what you see may not be all.
All children need our attention.
2.
I think adolescence is the most important thing in growing up human life.
Therefore, children don\'t have to overwork themselves in adolescence.
And they have to make themselves to be stable their body and mind in adolescence.
Finally, child labor must stop in the world
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Lucy
I think Korea doesn\'t have almost child labor.
>>CORRECT!
To be honest, Korea is rich compared to other counties.
To be honest, Korea is rich compared to other counties.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore almost children can live safely and receive an education well.
Therefore almost children can live safely and receive an education well.
>>Therefore almost children can live safely and receive an education as well.
But there might be child labor who a handful of children with disabled parents and poor home.
>>But there might be child labor wherein handful of children with disabled parents and has poor home.
Ultimately, what you see may not be all.
>>CORRECT!
All children need our attention.
All children need our attention.
>>CORRECT!
I think adolescence is the most important thing in growing up human life.
>>I think adolescence is the most important thing in growing up.
Therefore, children don\'t have to overwork themselves in adolescence.
>>Therefore, children don\'t have to overwork themselves in adolescence period.
And they have to make themselves to be stable their body and mind in adolescence.
>>And they have to make themselves to be stable and so as their body and mind.
Finally, child labor must stop in the world
>>CORRECT!
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