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2020-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

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I prefer to work at office There are some reasons to support my opinion. Most of all, I can’t concentrate on my work enough at home. There are many things to distract me like TV, Internet and my brother. Working at office will encourage me to work harder. Secondly, I prefer working with collegues to working alone. If I work alone , it might be boring. I always enjoy having a lunch with my collegues. And we can share our opinions about work anytime. For these reasons, I would like to work at an office.

강사 첨삭

Hi Bo [이름].
Thanks for the response to the homework:) Have a great day outside and enjoy your workout later.
-Rachel
I prefer to work at office
>> correct
>> I prefer working in the office.
There are some reasons to support my opinion.
>> correct
Most of all, I can’t concentrate on my work enough at home. There are many things to distract me like TV, Internet and my brother.
>> correct
>> OR: Most of all, I can\'t concentrate on my work enough at home because there are many distracting things such as TV, internet and my brother.
Working at office will encourage me to work harder.
>> correct
>> OR: Working in the office will motivate me to work harder.
Secondly, I prefer working with colleagues to working alone. If I work alone , it might be boring. I always enjoy having a lunch with my colleagues. And we can share our opinions about work anytime.
For these reasons, I would like to work at an office.
>> correct (just try to spell colleagues correctly)

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