Homework
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1. In your opinion, why do you think coral reefs continue to die?
I haven\'t known the meaning of coral reefs before I saw this question. Thus, I searched the internet to find its meaning, and what makes it to die. They continue die because of stress from the rising temperature of water in the article said.
2. Aside from the dwindling coral reefs, what are the other effects of the continuing rise in earth’s temperature?
First, deforestation. CO2 causes global warming, and forest changes CO2 to be O2. There are not enough plant nowadays since it has been being cut for a long time. Thus environment has been lost the power of recovery itself.
Second, plenty of factorys. Factory uses fuel, electricity, oil, and something. It makes various CO2, and air pollution. Hence, global warming is also effected. Moreover, if it is not an enough developed country, it must be more harmful to the earth. It\'s because they don\'t consider the status of nature, and environment.
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I haven\'t known the meaning of coral reefs before I saw this question.
>>CORRECT!
Thus, I searched the internet to find its meaning, and what makes it to die.
>> Thus, I searched the internet to find its meaning, and what makes it die.
They continue die because of stress from the rising temperature of water in the article said.
>>They continue to die because of stress from the rising temperature of water in the said article.
First, deforestation.
>>CORRECT!
CO2 causes global warming, and forest changes CO2 to be O2.
>>CORRECT!
There are not enough plant nowadays since it has been being cut for a long time.
>>CORRECT!
Thus environment has been lost the power of recovery itself.
>>Thus, environment has lost the power of recovery itself.
Second, plenty of factorys.
>>Second, plenty of factories.
Factory uses fuel, electricity, oil, and something.
>>CORRECT!
It makes various CO2, and air pollution.
>>CORRECT!
Hence, global warming is also effected.
>>CORRECT!
Moreover, if it is not an enough developed country, it must be more harmful to the earth.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s because they don\'t consider the status of nature, and environment
>>CORRECT!
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