Homework
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1. Why do you think it is not wise to consume meat from wild animals?
We do not know whether they have parasite in their body or not. If they have, and we don\'t have enough immune system in our body to against that, we would face unknown disease as a corona virus.
2. What exotic food do you have in your country? Why do people eat them?
The thing is a boiled caterpillar called \'beon-de-gi\'. People have it as a side manu when they are drinking soju. The taste of beon de gi soup is well matched with soju. And it is good for losing a weight because it has less calories. Moreover, it\'s good for stamina like a balut in the Philippines. Thus, people have it sometimes.
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We do not know whether they have parasite in their body or not.
>>CORRECT!
If they have, and we don\'t have enough immune system in our body to against that, we would face unknown disease as a corona virus.
>>If they have, and we don\'t have enough immune system in our body fight against that, we would face unknown disease like corona virus.
The thing is a boiled caterpillar called \'beon-de-gi\'.
>>CORRECT!
People have it as a side manu when they are drinking soju.
>>People have it as a side menu when they are drinking soju.
The taste of beon de gi soup is well matched with soju.
>>CORRECT!
And it is good for losing a weight because it has less calories.
>>And it is good for losing weight because it has less calories.
Moreover, it\'s good for stamina like a balut in the Philippines.
>>CORRECT!
Thus, people have it sometimes
>>CORRECT!
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