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2020-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. What other alternatives can you think of aside from having online lectures/classes? I have no idea although I try to think other way to have a class instead of online. 2. What will be will the advantages and disadvantages of online lectures? The advantage is people will save time to go school, or some specific place to join a class. Moreover, it is able to be recorded while they are having a class in online. So that, they can totally same study again if they have enthusiastic, or don\'t understand what their teachers said. And then, students are able to concentrate at having an online class if the class is organized well with plenty of animimation things since they might not feel bored. On the other hand, there is disadvantage that most students might not concentrate it while they have a class. There are lots of thing to do on their window screen such as shopping, game, and YouTube things. So that, students would not get enough knowledge as much as their teachers expected.

강사 첨삭

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~Teacher Lucy

I have no idea although I try to think other way to have a class instead of online. 
>>I have no idea although I try to think other ways to have a class instead of online. 
The advantage is people will save time to go school, or some specific place to join a class.
>>CORRECT!
Moreover, it is able to be recorded while they are having a class in online.
>>Moreover, it is able to be recorded while they are having a class online.
 So that, they can totally same study again if they have enthusiastic, or don\'t understand what their teachers said.
>>
 So that, they can totally study again if they are enthusiastic, or don\'t understand what their teachers said.
And then, students are able to concentrate at having an online class if the class is organized well with plenty of animimation things since they might not feel bored. 
>>And then, students are able to concentrate at having online class if the class is organized well with plenty of animation things since they might not feel bored. 
On the other hand, there is disadvantage that most students might not concentrate it while they have a class. 
>>CORRECT!
There are lots of thing to do on their window screen such as shopping, game, and YouTube things.
>>CORRECT!
 So that, students would not get enough knowledge as much as their teachers expected.
>>CORRECT!

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