homework
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Many people think that human beings should test their new medicine on new animals. What is your opinion on this issue. Give reasons and details to support your answer.
I think trial test on animals is needed for new medicine.
There are some reasons to support my answer.
First, new medicines must be used after their safety is certificated. To do so, experiments must precedes animals with similar genes to humans.
However, experiments on the animals have to be carried out without any indiscretion by making certain rules because the animal\'s life is also so important.
Second, new medicines are essential for human beings to lead a life.
For example, new vaccine is needed to cure corona-virus. The experiment on animals might be indispensable to get it.
For these reasons, I think that we should takes experiments on animals carefully.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bo [이름],
Thanks for the prompt reply to the homework you were given. I will surely miss checking your homework:) This is a great answer though.
-Rachel
I think trial test on animals is needed for new medicine. There are some reasons to support my answer.
>> correct
First, new medicines must be used after their safety is certificated. To do so, experiments must precedes animals with similar genes to humans.
First, new medicines must be used after their safety is certificated. To do so, experiments must precedes animals with similar genes to humans.
>> To do so, experiments to animals with similar genes must precede human experiments.
However, experiments on the animals have to be carried out without any indiscretion by making certain rules because the animal\'s life is also so important.
However, experiments on the animals have to be carried out without any indiscretion by making certain rules because the animal\'s life is also so important.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
Second, new medicines are essential for human beings to lead a life.
Second, new medicines are essential for human beings to lead a life.
>> correct
For example, new vaccine is needed to cure corona-virus. The experiment on animals might be indispensable to get it.
For these reasons, I think that we should take experiments on animals carefully.
For example, new vaccine is needed to cure corona-virus. The experiment on animals might be indispensable to get it.
For these reasons, I think that we should take experiments on animals carefully.
>> correct (perfect!)
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