homework
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Actually I don\'t know who have lost their jobs but I know the person
who quit his job himself. That\'s my father. He have worked his own bussiness for 30 years.
but last year, He sold the company to another person and he have stayed in his hometown.
I really respect where my father walked away during his whole life.
Of course, I want to write more sentences, unfortunately I have so many homeworks from my university class :(
See you next class!!
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Hello there [이름] ~
Thank you for all your hard work this week!
Have a really good weekend!
See you next week~
Actually I don\'t know who have lost their jobs but I know the person
who quit his job himself.
who quit his job himself.
>>Actually, I don\'t know anyone who lost their job but I know someone who quit his job.
That\'s my father.
>>He is my father.
He have worked his own bussiness for 30 years.
>>He has worked in his own business for 30 years.
but last year, He sold the company to another person and he have stayed in his hometown.
>>But last year, he sold the company to another person and stayed home ever since.
I really respect where my father walked away during his whole life.
>>I really respect where my father walked on during his whole life.
Of course, I want to write more sentences, unfortunately I have so many homeworks from my university class :(
>>Of course, I want to write more sentences but, I have so many homework from my university class.
See you next class!!
>>See you in the next class!
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