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1. Why is Jeju very famous not only to Koreans but to other foreign nationals?
Jeju is an island which locates at the nearest part of the equator in South Korea. So that, we expect nice scenery, and weather when we get to Jeju. Government has been developing it becoming more well known in the world since Korea doesn\'t have enough resources to sell. Thus, there are lots of amusement, hot tourist spots, park, beach, and some etc. People are able to visit various themes during a week, the period is enough to see all of the hot places in Jeju if I am not mistaken calculation. Moreover, yummy foods make it further specially although the price is food is quite expensive.
2. Where do you think is the best place to go on honeymoon? Why?
If my future wife wants to have taking a rest, I would bring her to Brunei. It\'s the best place I have been visited because of an empire hotel. Infinite pool, sun set, afternoon tea, golf club, and differentiated gentle customer service make it special.
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~Lucy
Jeju is an island which locates at the nearest part of the equator in South Korea.
>>CORRECT!
So that, we expect nice scenery, and weather when we get to Jeju.
>>So, we expect nice scenery, and weather when we get to Jeju.
Government has been developing it becoming more well known in the world since Korea doesn\'t have enough resources to sell.
>>CORRECT!
Thus, there are lots of amusement, hot tourist spots, park, beach, and some etc.
>>CORRECT!
People are able to visit various themes during a week, the period is enough to see all of the hot places in Jeju if I am not mistaken calculation.
>>People are able to visit various themes during a week, the period is enough to see all of the hot places in Jeju if I am not mistaken in calculating.
Moreover, yummy foods make it further specially although the price is food is quite expensive.
>> Moreover, yummy foods make it further specially although the price is quite expensive.
If my future wife wants to have taking a rest, I would bring her to Brunei.
>>If my future wife wants to have a rest, I would bring her to Brunei.
It\'s the best place I have been visited because of an empire hotel.
>>CORRECT!
Infinite pool, sun set, afternoon tea, golf club, and differentiated gentle customer service make it special.
>>CORRECT!
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