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2020-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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The pros of living in one place is that you can get close to your neighbors. If you stay in an area for a while, you get to say hello and make small talk. Staying in one place is comfortable, above all things. When you live through the history of a city, you know down to every corner and there is no way but to love where you live. However, staying in one place gets boring. Knowing your city down to every corner means that there are no new things to draw you interest. It means that there are less chance of meeting a new type of friends, and lack change in your enviornment. Moving in search of another place means exactly the opposite. It means meeting someone unknown, change in your enviornment, and sometimes unfriendly. I prefer searching another place to move. I\'ve lived in one place for more than 10years, and moved last year. Through the process, I realised that sometimes starting again in a whole new place is necessory in life. Nontheless, I\'d like to go back to my cozy city one day.

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Hi [이름]~! ^^ Thanks for your ideas in answering the topic. Have a great time!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
The pros of living in one place is that you can get close to your neighbors. 
>>> CORRECT
If you stay in an area for a while, you get to say hello and make small talk.
>>> CORRECT
Staying in one place is comfortable, above all things. 
>>> CORRECT
When you live through the history of a city, you know down to every corner and there is no way but to love where you live.
>>> CORRECT
However, staying in one place gets boring.
>>> CORRECT
Knowing your city down to every corner means that there are no new things to draw your interest.
>>> CORRECT
 It means that there are less chance of meeting a new type of friends, and lack change in your environment. 
>>> CORRECT
Moving in search of another place means exactly the opposite.
>>> CORRECT
It means meeting someone unknown, change in your environment, and sometimes unfriendly.
>>> CORRECT
 I prefer searching another place to move. 
>>> CORRECT
I\'ve lived in one place for more than 10 years, and moved last year. 
>>> CORRECT
Through the process, I realized that sometimes starting again in a whole new place is necessary in life.
>>> CORRECT
Nonetheless, I\'d like to go back to my cozy city one day.
>>> CORRECT

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