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2020-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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(Essay) Do you spend a long time browsing in bookshops? Yes, I do. I\'m basically at the bookstore for more than two hours. And if I can\'t go to the bookstore, I can browsing in online bookstore. I\'m browsing in online bookstore all day long. And when I get stressed, I buy a lot of books. But these days, I can\'t go to the bookstore. PS. Teacher, I didn\'t know the words of the anniversary. I can see it now. Thank you for writing down words that I don\'t understand well.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Check below for my corrections on your work. Have a good day! ~~T.Dee

Yes, I do.
>>CORRECT!
I\'m basically at the bookstore for more than two hours.
>>CORRECT
And if I can\'t go to the bookstore, I can browsing in online bookstore.
>>And, if I can\'t go to the bookstore, I can browse at an online bookstore.
I\'m browsing in online bookstore all day long.
>>I can browse online all day long.
And when I get stressed, I buy a lot of books.
>>CORRECT
But these days, I can\'t go to the bookstore.
>>CORRECT
>>OR: But nowadays, I can\'t visits bookstores anymore.

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