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2020-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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How do you manage social distancing? I do not need to manage social distancing because I am in my room only. I can\'t go out for 2 weeks owning to self quarantine. How do you keep in touch to your friends and loved ones after the corona-virus outbreak? I have a phone, laptop, and internet. Thus, there are lot of way to keep in touch with them. I am able to email foreigners. I can call my friends, and colleagues. Most of the times, I use applications such as Kakao talk, Line, Whats app. How did your life change after the corona-virus outbreak? I think I become a lazy due to the virus. Because I am a kind of custody in my room only, I don\'t need to take a shower, shave my mustaches everyday, and have meals every on times. And I use to stay in the bed more than 8 hours a day excluding taking a sleep in the night, I think I might lose my muscles. So I try to do push up 100 a day, and do squat. To do not being lazy anymore.

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Thank you [이름]!
~Lucy 

I do not need to manage social distancing because I am in my room only. 
>>CORRECT!
I can\'t go out for 2 weeks owning to self quarantine.
>>CORRECT!
I have a phone, laptop, and internet. 
>>CORRECT!
Thus, there are lot of way to keep in touch with them. 
>>Thus, there are lot of ways to keep in touch with them. 
I am able to email foreigners.
>>CORRECT!
 I can call my friends, and colleagues. 
>>CORRECT!
Most of the times, I use applications such as Kakao talk, Line, Whats app.
>>CORRECT!
I think I become a lazy due to the virus. 
>>I think I become a lazy person due to the virus. 
Because I am a kind of custody in my room only, I don\'t need to take a shower, shave my mustaches everyday, and have meals every on times. 
>>CORRECT!
And I use to stay in the bed more than 8 hours a day excluding taking a sleep in the night, I think I might lose my muscles. 
>>CORRECT!
So I try to do push up 100 a day, and do squat. 
>>So I try to do push up 100 times a day, and do squat. 
To do not being lazy anymore.
>>CORRECT!

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