Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) What advice would you give to an older person who wants to feel young?
Enjoy your current age.
And exercise to keep your body healthy.
Youth is not difficult.
You can be young when you start doing what you think is difficult.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Your advice is very inspiring. Overcoming difficulties definitely make people motivated to do more. Enjoy your day!~~T.Dee
>>CORRECT!
And exercise to keep your body healthy.
And exercise to keep your body healthy.
>>And, you have to exercise to keep your body healthy.
Youth is not difficult.
Youth is not difficult.
>>Feeling youthful is not difficult.
You can be young when you start doing what you think is difficult.
You can be young when you start doing what you think is difficult.
>>You can feel young when you start doing what you think is difficult.
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