HOMEWORK!
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay Question:
What are the things that you like doing in your free time?
When I have free time, I go jogging or walking.
I love to exercise.
When I exercise, my trivial thoughts disappear.
When I have free time, I read a book.
Especially, I like history books.
Reading history makes me feel like I\'m living in that era.
We do not reapeat the sorrow of losing our country only when we know history.
강사 첨삭
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When I have free time, I go jogging or walking.
>>correct
>>I jog or walk during my free time.
I love to exercise.
I love to exercise.
>>correct
When I exercise, my trivial thoughts disappear.
>>correct
When I have free time, I read a book.
When I exercise, my trivial thoughts disappear.
>>correct
When I have free time, I read a book.
>>correct
>>I read books in my free time.
Especially, I like history books.
Especially, I like history books.
>>correct
>>I prefer reading history books.
Reading history makes me feel like I\'m living in that era.
>>correct
Reading history makes me feel like I\'m living in that era.
>>correct
>>Reading history books makes me feel like I\'m living in that period.
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