HOMEWORK!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Please answer the question below:
Choose a person or people you admire and explain why.
The person I respect the most is my father.
But when I was young, I hated my father.
Because compared to other fathers, he seemed neither caring nor capable.
But when I became a parent, I felt that my father was great.
He has worked for the family for 45 years
Also, It is hard to care of the family but he still do long service in church.
My father is thought to be the small but largest giant.
He had a terrible disease because he raised us, but he endured it and overcame it.
Looking at my father, I am worried that I can do well.
For this reason, I respect my father the most.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Mr. [Name]. Thank you for dropping by. I appreciate the effort.
I will see you tomorrow! Take care! ^^
-T. Gracelyn-
The person I respect the most is my father.
>>correct
But when I was young, I hated my father.
But when I was young, I hated my father.
>>correct
Because compared to other fathers, he seemed neither caring nor capable.
Because compared to other fathers, he seemed neither caring nor capable.
>>correct
>>Compared to other fathers, he was neither caring nor capable.
But when I became a parent, I felt that my father was great.
But when I became a parent, I felt that my father was great.
>>correct
He has worked for the family for 45 years.
He has worked for the family for 45 years.
>>correct
Also, it is hard to care of the family but he still do long service in church.
Also, it is hard to care of the family but he still do long service in church.
>>Also, it is hard to take care of the family but he did a long service in church.
My father is thought to be the small but largest giant.
My father is thought to be the small but largest giant.
>>My father is regarded to be small but the largest giant.
He had a terrible disease because he raised us, but he endured it and overcame it.
He had a terrible disease because he raised us, but he endured it and overcame it.
>>correct
Looking at my father, I am worried that I can\'t do well.
Looking at my father, I am worried that I can\'t do well.
>>correct
For this reason, I respect my father the most.
For this reason, I respect my father the most.
>>correct
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