Homework!
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First, I usually clean my room on weekend. On weekdays, I can\'t clear up because when I draw the picture using pencils and erasers, graphite and migwish always make my room dirty. So usually Saturday morning, I vacuum and wipe my room. Secondly, I usually date with my boyfriend. As He and I are very busy on weekdays, we usually meet on Sunday. Mostly We meet afternoon, we are dating outdoors and have dinner together. After dinner, we go to cafe and talk to each other what we did last week.
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Hi [이름],
Thanks for your effort doing homework!:)
Have a wonderful weekend!
First, I usually clean my room on weekend.
>>> First, I usually clean my room on weekends.
On weekdays, I can\'t clear up because when I draw the picture using pencils and erasers, graphite and migwish always make my room dirty.
>>> On weekdays, I can\'t clear up my room because when I draw the picture using pencils and erasers, graphite and mishmash always make my room dirty.
So usually Saturday morning, I vacuum and wipe my room.
>>> CORRECT
>>OR: Every Saturday morning, I vacuum and wipe my room.
Secondly, I usually date with my boyfriend. As He and I are very busy on weekdays, we usually meet on Sunday.
>>> Secondly, I have a date with my boyfriend because during weekdays both of us is very busy. We meet on Sundays.
Mostly We meet afternoon, we are dating outdoors and have dinner together.
>>> Most of the time we meet in the afternoon, we are dating outdoors and having dinner together.
After dinner, we go to cafe and talk to each other what we did last week.
>>> After dinner, we go to the cafe and talk to each other what we did last week.
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