Homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay Question:
What is one thing you could not live without and why?
All living things cannot survive without water and oxygen.
But humans cannot live without this as well as water and oxygen.
This is human relations.
The human relationships have the meaning of human existence.
The reason why I study and the reason why I exercise is to communicate with other people.
So humans cannot live without humans.
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All living things cannot survive without water and oxygen.
>>correct
But humans cannot live without this as well as water and oxygen.
But humans cannot live without this as well as water and oxygen.
>>But humans cannot live without these as well.
This is human relations.
This is human relations.
>>correct
The human relationships have the meaning of human existence.
The human relationships have the meaning of human existence.
>>Human relationships are important for the human existence.
The reason why I study and the reason why I exercise is to communicate with other people.
The reason why I study and the reason why I exercise is to communicate with other people.
>>correct
So humans cannot live without humans.
So humans cannot live without humans.
>>correct
>>So humans cannot live alone.
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