Homework!
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Essay Question:
Should boys and girls be in separate classes?
I am against boys and girls having separate classes.
It is good to meet friends of different sexes from childhood.
Then, you can live by understanding people of different sexes.
Also, sex crimes could be reduced.
The world must live with diffrent sexes and diffrent races.
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>>correct
>> I don\'t agree that boys and girls should be in separate classes.
It is good to meet friends of different sexes from childhood.
It is good to meet friends of different sexes from childhood.
>>correct
>> It is good to meet new friends of different genders from childhood.
Then, you can live by understanding people of different sexes.
Then, you can live by understanding people of different sexes.
>>correct
Also, sex crimes could be reduced.
Also, sex crimes could be reduced.
>>correct
The world must live with different sexes and different races.
The world must live with different sexes and different races.
>>correct
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