Homework
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Do you think the weather/temperature does have an effect on the control/spread of the CoVid-19 virus?
I have heard virus can\'t live if the temperature is too cold. So, eskimo who lives in the north pole does not get a cold. I tried to gather the information for this, I couldn\'t find. The last posting is 2007 regarding the inuit. I do not know why Koreans lost the interest to them. Anyways, I guess weather affect a bit too. If the weather outside is nice, people would like to go out for picnic although they know they have to do self quarantine. Furthermore, if they are parent who take care of children, they will bring out their babies wearing a mask because many children feel depressed, and stressed at staying only home. On the other hands, people prefer to stay at home if there are raining, foggy, or something bad weather. The second example might have lesser possibility to get the virus rather than previous one.
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I have heard virus can\'t live if the temperature is too cold.
>>CORRECT!
So, eskimo who lives in the north pole does not get a cold.
>>So, Eskimo who lives in the North pole does not get a cold.
I tried to gather the information for this, I couldn\'t find.
I tried to gather the information for this, I couldn\'t find.
>>CORRECT!
The last posting is 2007 regarding the inuit.
>> The last posting is 2007 regarding the Inuit.
I do not know why Koreans lost the interest to them.
>>CORRECT!
Anyways, I guess weather affect a bit too.
>> Anyways, I guess weather affects a bit too.
If the weather outside is nice, people would like to go out for picnic although they know they have to do self quarantine.
>>CORRECT!
Furthermore, if they are parent who take care of children, they will bring out their babies wearing a mask because many children feel depressed, and stressed at staying only home.
>> Furthermore, if they are parents who take care of children, they will bring out their babies wearing a mask because many children feel depressed, and stressed at staying home only.
On the other hands, people prefer to stay at home if there are raining, foggy, or something bad weather.
>>On the other hands, people prefer to stay at home if it\'s raining, foggy, or when it has a bad weather.
The second example might have lesser possibility to get the virus rather than previous one.
>>CORRECT!
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