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Q : What do you do to relax after working hard or experiencing other challenging or stressful situations?
I have several methods I use to relax when I get stress from work.
One is to exercise like indoor golf if I’m not exhausted.
When I exercise I can relieve the stress and I can forget the company’s work.
The Second is the method that I use when I was exhausted.
I spend time drink coffee alone in a quiet cafe.
I look back the past time if I have done anything wrong.
And another way is to talk to my wife.
Talking to my wife about a stressful situation can comfort me, and talking about what\'s inside of me will relieve my stress.
I try to relieve the stress using possible methods because it is harmful to me to put up stress.
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Hello Sir [이름]! Finding a way to relieve stress is very important especially nowadays. Keep your life stress free. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>I have several methods to relax when I get stress from work.
One is to exercise like indoor golf if I’m not exhausted.
One is to exercise like indoor golf if I’m not exhausted.
>>One is to exercise, like playing indoor golf, if I’m not exhausted.
When I exercise I can relieve the stress and I can forget the company’s work.
When I exercise I can relieve the stress and I can forget the company’s work.
>>CORRECT!
The Second is the method that I use when I was exhausted.
The Second is the method that I use when I was exhausted.
>>The second is the method is what I do when I feel exhausted.
I spend time drink coffee alone in a quiet cafe.
I spend time drink coffee alone in a quiet cafe.
>>I spend time drinking coffee alone in a quiet cafe.
I look back the past time if I have done anything wrong.
I look back the past time if I have done anything wrong.
>>I look back I reflect on the past and I evaluate if I have done anything wrong.
And another way is to talk to my wife.
And another way is to talk to my wife.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: And, the third method is talking to my wife.
Talking to my wife about a stressful situation can comfort me, and talking about what\'s inside of me will relieve my stress.
Talking to my wife about a stressful situation can comfort me, and talking about what\'s inside of me will relieve my stress.
>>CORRECT!
I try to relieve the stress using possible methods because it is harmful to me to put up stress.
I try to relieve the stress using possible methods because it is harmful to me to put up stress.
>>I try to relieve my stress using possible methods because it is harmful if I keep the stress by myself.
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