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2020-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Abigail

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I would like to go on a trip to America The reason is that I have been studying English for 3months through Friends called very famous comic show in America. I watch Friends every day so I really want to go to filming location By any chance, if I forgot recording our class, you definitely should tell me or press the button! I really want to study using our class recording

강사 첨삭

Hi Gony! I enjoyed talking to you during our class. Regarding your request, nothing to worry, I\'ll remind you to record our class everyday so you can review our classes!
-Teacher Abigail^^
I would like to go on a trip to America
>>CORRECT!
OR>>I would like to travel to America.
The reason is that I have been studying English for 3months through Friends called very famous comic show in America.
>>The reason is that I have been studying English for 3 months through the famous comedy show in America called Friends.
I watch Friends every day so I really want to go to filming location
>>I watch Friends everyday so I really want to go to their filming location.

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