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I think that I decided to be an architect is the best decision in my life. When I was very young, I just dreamt to be an architect because my best friend dreamt to be an architect. But, as I grow up, I could understand what the architect do and got interest in their works. So, I read many books associated with architecture and design. I also felt happyness when I made a model of building. Because of my decision, I\'m very satisfied with studying my major now.
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-T. James-
I think that I decided to be an architect is the best decision in my life.
>>> I think, when I decided to be an architect that is the best decision in my life.
When I was very young, I just dreamt to be an architect because my best friend dreamt to be an architect.
>> CORRECT
But, as I grow up, I could understand what the architect do and got interest in their works.
>>> But, as I grow up, I could understand what the architect do and got interested in their works.
So, I read many books associated with architecture and design.
>>> CORRECT
I also felt happyness when I made a model of building. Because of my decision, I\'m very satisfied with studying my major now.
>>> I also felt happy when I made a model of a building, Because of my decision, I\'m very satisfied with studying my major now.
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