Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Do you think it\'s disrespectful to argue with your elders?
No, I don\'t.
It is inconvenient to argue with an elders.
But not all of them are right.
However, it is not wrong.
So I recommend that they speak in a roundabout way so that they don\'t feel bad.
강사 첨삭
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No, I don\'t.
>>CORRECT!
It is inconvenient to argue with an elders.
It is inconvenient to argue with an elders.
>>It is inconvenient to argue with elders.
But not all of them are right.
But not all of them are right.
>>CORRECT!
However, it is not wrong.
However, it is not wrong.
>>CORRECT!
So I recommend that they speak in a roundabout way so that they don\'t feel bad.
So I recommend that they speak in a roundabout way so that they don\'t feel bad.
>>So, I recommend that they speak in a polite way so that they don\'t feel bad.
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