Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay) What do you do to relax after working hard or experiencing other challenging or stressful situations?
I listen to music.
I listen the music loudly and sing along.
If there is no space to listen music loudly, listen to it in the car.
Then I feel a little relaxed.
강사 첨삭
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I listen to music.
>>CORRECT!
I listen the music loudly and sing along.
I listen the music loudly and sing along.
>>I listen to the music while it\'s playing loudly and I sing along.
If there is no space to listen music loudly, listen to it in the car.
If there is no space to listen music loudly, listen to it in the car.
>>If there is no space for me to listen to music loudly, listen to it in the car.
Then I feel a little relaxed.
Then I feel a little relaxed.
>>Then, afterwards, I feel a little relaxed.
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