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1.
I have never witnessed a crime and I have never been to court.
But one of my friend have ever witnessed a crime.
He told me \'I was so nervous that I didn\'t remember anything in court\'
And he said me \'The mood was very heavy in court\'
2.
One day, when I worked in a store, a drunken man came in a store.
He was drunk and tried to swear and hit me.
I felt a sense of threat and than I called the police right now.
The police took him and called me later.
The police asked me to do so \'If he came again in your store, you should resolve yourself quietly\'
I felt displeasure from the police and they were very annoyed.
Some old Korean police officers are not very courteousness but [이름] Korean cops are very kind.
Especially, police officers in the provinces are lazy.
So if when I called the police and the old police come, I can\'t trust them well.
Because they are very fat and arrogant.
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~Lucy
I have never witnessed a crime and I have never been to court.
>>I have never witnessed a crime and I have never been to a court.
But one of my friend have ever witnessed a crime.
>>CORRECT!
He told me \'I was so nervous that I didn\'t remember anything in court\'
He told me \'I was so nervous that I didn\'t remember anything in court\'
>>CORRECT!
And he said me \'The mood was very heavy in court\'
And he said me \'The mood was very heavy in court\'
>>And he said to me \'The mood was very heavy in court\'.
One day, when I worked in a store, a drunken man came in a store.
>>One day, when I worked in a store, a drunken man came in my store.
He was drunk and tried to swear and hit me.
>>CORRECT!
I felt a sense of threat and than I called the police right now.
I felt a sense of threat and than I called the police right now.
>>I felt a sense of threat and than I called the police right then.
The police took him and called me later.
>>CORRECT!
The police asked me to do so \'If he came again in your store, you should resolve yourself quietly\'.
The police asked me to do so \'If he came again in your store, you should resolve yourself quietly\'.
>>CORRECT!
I felt displeasure from the police and they were very annoyed.
I felt displeasure from the police and they were very annoyed.
>>CORRECT!
Some old Korean police officers are not very courteousness but [이름] Korean cops are very kind.
Some old Korean police officers are not very courteousness but [이름] Korean cops are very kind.
>>Some old Korean police officers are not very courteous but [이름] Korean cops are very kind.
Especially, police officers in the provinces are lazy.
>>CORRECT!
So if when I called the police and the old police come, I can\'t trust them well.
So if when I called the police and the old police come, I can\'t trust them well.
>>CORRECT!
Because they are very fat and arrogant.
Because they are very fat and arrogant.
>>CORRECT!
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