Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Do you think robots will replace humans in the future?
Yes, I do.
The future is changing rapidly.
So, Robots are evolving.
Robots are more information learned than humans.
Therefore, robots can do more than humans.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss Alisha! I think that it\'s very likely that robots will be so advanced in the future. We\'ll find out soon. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>CORRECT!
The future is changing rapidly.
The future is changing rapidly.
>>CORRECT!
So, Robots are evolving.
So, Robots are evolving.
>>So, the development of robots is evolving.
Robots are more information learned than humans.
Robots are more information learned than humans.
>>Robots have information stored compared to humans.
Therefore, robots can do more than humans.
Therefore, robots can do more than humans.
>>CORRECT!
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