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2011-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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It has been said, 'Not everything that is learned is contained in books.' Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Of course, as to getting knowledge, I believe both are very important. But, If you want to remember your act as long as possible, I want to say to you <Experience is must to do.>. Since our bodies have also rememberability, our bodies are trying to remember how we act whenever we do something. But if you don’t have much time to experience and don’t get a chance, you’d better read a book. It is the better than not to do.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Haily.Excellent opinion! I surely agree to this! We can learn a lot from books. Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you:It has been said, \'Not everything that is learned is contained in books.\'>>CorrectCompare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. >>CorrectIn your opinion, which source is more important? Why?>>CorrectOf course, as to getting knowledge, I believe both are very important. >>CorrectBut, If you want to remember your act as long as possible, I want to say to you <Experience is must to do.>. >>But, If you want to remember your act as long as possible, I want to say to you <Experience is a must to do.>. Since our bodies have also rememberability, our bodies are trying to remember how we act whenever we do something.>>Since our brains also have memories, our bodies are trying to remember how we act whenever we do something.But if you don’t have much time to experience and don’t get a chance, you’d better read a book.>>But if you don\'t have an opportunity to experience , you\' d better read a book.It is the better than not to do.>>It is better rather than nothing at all.

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