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One of my favorite song is \'Cheer Up\' sung by \'Twice\'. As I heard the song at first time, I thought it is little strange because the melody is very unique. But, the more I heared the song, the more I liked it. And I became addicted to the song. But, the biggest reason that I still like the song is that this song brings me the days of my freshman year in high school. When I was in high school, I heard to the song almost every day with my friends. And I also experienced a lots of happy events with them. So, I still listen to the song to feel the emotion at that period.
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Hi Leo! T[이름]k you so much. See you:) Me, one of my favorite songs is \"just be who are\" by School of Rock.
-Teacher James
One of my favorite song is \'Cheer Up\' sung by \'Twice\'.
>>> One of my favorite songs is \'Cheer Up\' sung by \'Twice\'.
As I heard the song at first time, I thought it is little strange because the melody is very unique.
>>> As I heard the song at first time, I thought it was little strange because the melody is very unique.
But, the more I heared the song, the more I liked it.
>>> But, the more I heard the song, the more I liked it.
And I became addicted to the song. But, the biggest reason that I still like the song is that this song brings me the days of my freshman year in high school.
>>> CORRECT
When I was in high school, I heard to the song almost every day with my friends. And I also experienced a lots of happy events with them.
>>> When I was in high school, I listened to the song almost every day with my friends. And I also experienced a lot of happy events with them.
So, I still listen to the song to feel the emotion at that period.
>>> CORRECT
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