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2020-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. If now is in 2050, I would be living in a foreign country. I will be getting marry with a foreigner. So I will set up my guesthouse in foreign tourist area and I wound live very happy 2. I think the best inventions for me are clock and calendar. There are many inventions for living us now. And they are very useful and convenient. If there are no clock and calendar, It must have been very inconvenient for me. Because I have a bad memory. Therefore they made me for a good relationship with others. And they made me efficiently to live more and more

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

~Lucy

If now is in 2050, I would be living in a foreign country.

>>CORRECT!
I will be getting marry with a foreigner.

>>I will be getting married to a foreigner.

So I will set up my guesthouse in foreign tourist area and I wound live very happy

>>So I will set up my guesthouse in foreign tourist area and I would live very happyly.

I think the best inventions for me are clock and calendar.

>>CORRECT!
There are many inventions for living us now.

>>There are many inventions now.

And they are very useful and convenient.

>>CORRECT!
If there are no clock and calendar, It must have been very inconvenient for me.

>>CORRECT!
Because I have a bad memory.

>>CORRECT!
Therefore they made me for a good relationship with others.

>>Therefore, they made me have a good relationship with others.

And they made me efficiently to live more and more

>>And they made me efficiently to live more and more.

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