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How do you feel about conversations with people older than yourself?
When I talk with people who are older than me, I feel uncomfortable because I could make a mistake. However, I think that I\'m good at talking with people who are older than me. This is because some people who are older than me like me!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
This is perfect!
Your skills on sentence construction have really come a long way.
I gave you some alternative sentences that you can also use.
Learn from them and continue writing.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I talk with people who are older than me, I feel uncomfortable because I could make a mistake.
>> Correct
OR>> Whenever I talk with people who are older than me, I feel uncomfortable because I might say something to offend them.
However, I think that I\'m good at talking with people who are older than me.
>> Correct
This is because some people who are older than me like me!
>> Correct
OR>> This is because most older people seem to like me.
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