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학생이 쓴 원문
1.
I think the way of adjust is concentration.
Because not going to an office or school could be less focused than at home.
And I agree that the virus will speed up digital transformation.
Usually when there are many problems in the world, many things are developed to suit the situation.
Many people work at their homes becuase of the CoVid-19.
Therefore, they have many inconveniences in their home because they haven\'t adapted yet.
2.
I think the advantages are safe from the coronavirus.
And natural environment is getting better more and more.
Suddely, many animals start to show in all parts of nature.
Because there are no tourists and Local people outside.
And the disadvantage is to less effective work in home.
Because home is more comfortable than work and they can lose concentration
강사 첨삭
Thank you An!
~Teacher Lucy
I think the way of adjust is concentration.
>>I think the way of adjustment is concentration.
Because not going to an office or school could be less focused than at home.
>>Because not going to an office or school could be less focused than staying at home.
And I agree that the virus will speed up digital transformation.
>>CORRECT!
Usually when there are many problems in the world, many things are developed to suit the situation.
Usually when there are many problems in the world, many things are developed to suit the situation.
>>CORRECT!
Many people work at their homes becuase of the CoVid-19.
Many people work at their homes becuase of the CoVid-19.
>>Many people work at their homes because of the CoVid-19.
Therefore, they have many inconveniences in their home because they haven\'t adapted yet.
>>CORRECT!
I think the advantages are safe from the coronavirus.
I think the advantages are safe from the coronavirus.
>>I think the advantage is being safe from the coronavirus.
And natural environment is getting better more and more.
>>CORRECT!
Suddely, many animals start to show in all parts of nature.
Suddely, many animals start to show in all parts of nature.
>>Suddenly, many animals start to show in all parts of nature.
Because there are no tourists and local people outside.
>>CORRECT!
And the disadvantage is to less effective work in home.
And the disadvantage is to less effective work in home.
>>CORRECT!
Because home is more comfortable than work and they can lose concentration
Because home is more comfortable than work and they can lose concentration
>>CORRECT!
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