Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) What are three smart phone apps that you can\'t live without?
First, it is a bank app.
I can do banking easily.
Second, it is a shopping app.
I have a baby so I have to shop at home.
Third, it is a calendar app.
I have to mark everything on my calendar so I don\'t forget
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Your choices are very relatable to me. All these apps you mentioned are absolutely essential. They make things easier for us. ~~T.Dee
First, it is a bank app.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: The first is an online bank application.
I can do banking easily.
I can do banking easily.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: With it, I easily make bank transactions.
Second, it is a shopping app.
Second, it is a shopping app.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: The second is a shopping application.
I have a baby so I have to shop at home.
I have a baby so I have to shop at home.
>>I have a baby so I have to shop from home.
Third, it is a calendar app.
Third, it is a calendar app.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: The third is a calendar application.
I have to mark everything on my calendar so I don\'t forget
I have to mark everything on my calendar so I don\'t forget
>>I have to mark everything on my calendar so I don\'t forget my schedule.
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