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1.
I like to listen music is indie pop and funky pop.
I don\'t have favorite music because my favorite change from day to day.
I\'m this style which if I fall in love with one song, I keep listening to it every day.
Nowadays I\'m listening to music by singer who is Paul Kim and IU
2.
I think human ears are very sensitive.
The ear is the second most sensitive after the eyes.
Therefore, music gives people good a feeling or not.
And many people sympathize with the story and the lyrics of the song.
Finally, many people feel the pain of parting and love with listening to music.
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Thank you An!
~Lucy
I like to listen music is indie pop and funky pop.
>>I like to listen to indie pop and funky pop.
I don\'t have favorite music because my favorite change from day to day.
>>I don\'t have favorite music because my favorite changes from day to day.
I\'m this style which if I fall in love with one song, I keep listening to it every day.
>>It\'s my style which if I fall in love with one song, I keep listening to it every day.
Nowadays I\'m listening to music by singer who is Paul Kim and IU
>>Nowadays, I\'m listening to songs of Paul Kim and IU.
I think human ears are very sensitive.
>>CORRECT!
The ear is the second most sensitive after the eyes.
The ear is the second most sensitive after the eyes.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, music gives people good a feeling or not.
Therefore, music gives people good a feeling or not.
>>Therefore, music gives people good feeling or not.
And many people sympathize with the story and the lyrics of the song.
>>CORRECT!
Finally, many people feel the pain of parting and love with listening to music.
Finally, many people feel the pain of parting and love with listening to music.
>>Finally, many people feel the pain of parting and love in listening to music.
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