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2020-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

1. As a child, my dream car was \"Jeep Wrangler Sahara Black Color\" becuase I think the car is wild and the car has many angles. So the car was impressive to me when I saw the car actually. But now, my dream car has changed. Which my dream car is \'Tesla Model 3\' Because I have a electronic car that name is \'Cona Electronic\' Electronic car very useful and good for the environment When I drive electronic car, I can feel smooth. Therefore, I got used to drive Electronic car. 2. I think we should limit the use of cars on the road. So Korea limits cars to the number of license plates. But it doesn\'t work on very well. Therefor, we can\'t limit the cars because the cars are very useful. I think countries should change the cars eco-friendly. In Korea if Koreans want to buy electronic cars, the government provides some money to the people.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!
~Lucy

As a child, my dream car was \"Jeep Wrangler Sahara Black Color\"
>>CORRECT!
becuase I think the car is wild and the car has many angles.
>>Because I think the car is wild and the car has many angles.
So the car was impressive to me when I saw the car actually.
>>CORRECT!
But now, my dream car has changed.
>>CORRECT!
Which my dream car is \'Tesla Model 3\'
>>CORRECT!
Because I have a electronic car that name is \'Cona Electronic\'
Because I have an electronic car that is \'Cona Electronic\'
Electronic car very useful and good for the environment
>>Electronic car is very useful and good for the environment
When I drive electronic car, I can feel smooth.
When I drive an electronic car, I can feel it is smooth.
Therefore, I got used to drive Electronic car.
>>CORRECT!
I think we should limit the use of cars on the road.
>>CORRECT!
So Korea limits cars to the number of license plates.
>>CORRECT!
But it doesn\'t work on very well.
>>CORRECT!
Therefor, we can\'t limit the cars because the cars are very useful.
>>CORRECT!
I think countries should change the cars eco-friendly.
>>I think countries should change the cars as eco-friendly.
In Korea if Koreans want to buy electronic cars, the government provides some money to the people.
>>In Korea, if Koreans want to buy electronic cars, the government provides some money to the people.

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