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In my opinion, People have a sense of responsibility from thirty.
Because, they become office worker.
To adjust organization, People natually
learn responsibility.
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1. In my opinion, People have a sense of responsibility from thirty.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
OR: In my opinion, people have a sense of responsibility from the age of thirty.
2. Because, they become office worker.
>> Because they become employees or office workers.
3. To adjust organization, People natually learn responsibility.
2. Because, they become office worker.
>> Because they become employees or office workers.
3. To adjust organization, People natually learn responsibility.
>> To adjust organization, people naturally learn responsibility.
OR: To adjust organization, people naturally learn how to be responsible.
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