Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Do you feel different because of weather? How do different types of weather affect your emotions?
Yes, I do.
Rainy or cloudy days affect my emotion a lot.
On such a day, I feel very down.
And I feel excited when the wind blows slightly and the sunlight is good.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! We are exactly the same. I also feel gloomy when it is cloudy. I hope we always have sunny days. ~~T.Dee
Yes, I do.
>>CORRECT!
Rainy or cloudy days affect my emotion a lot.
Rainy or cloudy days affect my emotion a lot.
>>CORRECT!
On such a day, I feel very down.
On such a day, I feel very down.
>>CORRECT!
And I feel excited when the wind blows slightly and the sunlight is good.
And I feel excited when the wind blows slightly and the sunlight is good.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: In contrast, I feel excited when there is cool breeze while the sun is shining bright.
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