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Q. How much do Koreans value family ties?
In my opinion, Koreans value family ties very important. There are some reasons.
It is very common for adults to live with their parents.
And generally on the birthday spend time all family.
In particular, parents think that they should spend a birthday and a holiday together.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]. Thank you for this. Family tie is indeed much stronger in most Asian countries compared to the West.
- T. Beth
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In my opinion, Koreans value family ties very important. >>> In my opinion, Koreans consider family ties very important.
>>> OR: In my opinion, Koreans put great importance on family ties.
There are some reasons.
>>> correct
It is very common for adults to live with their parents.
It is very common for adults to live with their parents.
>>> correct
And generally on the birthday spend time all family.
And generally on the birthday spend time all family.
>>> And generally, they spend their birthday with their family.
In particular, parents think that they should spend a birthday and a holiday together.
In particular, parents think that they should spend a birthday and a holiday together.
>>> correct
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